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Now it just rains (free)

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The girl said let’s take this slowly
I said why do you want to get well so slowly?
She said why do you think you can play me you lowly you got no keys.
A message to All these lowly’s
Who think they aren’t free to rhyme.
You are and now it’s my time.
To speak words of truth
like the aftermath wrath of Eminem I’ll just write it down as proof.
Be cool and I will be too
I know u won’t though you’ll just be tight and tbt I do like to fight.
If I had one shot at everything I ever wanted then I already took it. I booked it.
They spoke to me only to fill me up with doubt and it got me down like I’m down at the end of the twelfth round.
But just don’t doubt the remedy I brought for your pain.
They called it a drought.
I call this my reign
Do what it takes to escape from the pain
Summer long drought
Now it just rains.
They fed me doubt
I just laughed like I’m played
Was a Summer long drought
But now it’s no game.

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"Baby Come Back, you can blame it all on me"

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I thought you were gonna get there this time. I really did. But, there were just like a couple of errors you know where it was like...you're trying to raise the bar and you just can't miss when you're doing that. So, still a no.

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So, I need to adjust my previous comment. I just, I looked at it again and it's something. I can't say it's everything but its something. And it could be a little sharper, definitely no doubt about that, but, you know, there's something I noticed the second time I read it and stop me if you don't wanna know this but, if you were performing this song and you hit every syllable just crystal clear like you know just perfect, perfect getting that sound out there, then yeah you know I think that would be something special but what works about this is not the bits and pieces you know, its not the nuts and bolts, it's the collective of all these pieces. It means something whole that it doesn't mean if you change one word so, I give you props for that. It's a good effort. I'm sure you're going to kill it with work tomorrow. Try to get up by like 11 though these doordashes don't deliver themselves.

Alright man. Good talk. 'Preciate ya'll.

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